I meant to say I love you
Before it was too late
But even before I met you
I am already out of date.
You sent me the breeze
And gave me this beautiful feel
That filled with lovely dreams
From head over the heels…
I meant to hold you close
Tightly against my heart
While my mind failed to propose
I had to tear myself apart.
Falling by your charm,
I want to hug you right away.
Inside, you made me grow warm
Yet I wander alone day by day.
I meant to whisper many things
Time and time again
Spreading my mighty wings
All went in vain.
What all I wish to do
Ever will I get to say?
Wonder can I come to you
And forever, I stay…
I meant to leave a happy note,
That brings you joy and cheer.
Then I realized am late
So never want you to fear.
Now I know life there is short
Let me wait till you can fly
And your ashes afloat.
Until then, I am a nomad in the sky.
I meant to take the backseat
As my wishes go craven
That’s the only way I retreat
Hence I am already taken.
For now, let you not know
That I ever exist…
But always, my love for you,
Will never resist…!
Happy Valentines Day!
Wow! Beautiful poem Rats:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bushra. :-)
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ReplyDeleteWISH YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES A VERY HAPPY VALENTINE's DAY..HAVE A GOOD ONE.NICE POEM.
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Thanks Kiran. will visit your site...
DeleteDeep and soul touching! Loved the way you rhymed this poem...It's like a beautiful song!
ReplyDeleteHappy valentines day! (Belated)
Thank you so much Valli.. Wishes. :-)
Deletewow...who made u write this poem ?? :P
ReplyDeleteThanks for your wow comment.. and my secret valentine inspired me to write these lines. :-)
DeleteVery beautiful Lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Khushbu.. welcome to my space. do visit again.. :-)
DeleteUnspoken, unrequited love, beautifully expressed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Meenakshi. I am delighted with your appreciation.. :-)
Deletea lovely read...very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Panchali ji.. am glad you liked it and much happy that you dropped your valuable comments. :-)
Deletei loved the feelings attached...beautifully expressed...!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjan.. I started writing it for personal use but later turned out to be a post here. am glad you loved my lines... :-)
DeleteWow! Lovely! Enjoyed every word of the poetry.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, sir. am happy that you enjoyed my lines.
DeleteNice poem ..hope u enjoyed ur valentines day ...small suggestion, use font colors which will be appealing to read :P
ReplyDeleteHey shailu. how ru? been so long.. thanks, dear. ya, my valentine went well.. hope yours too.. and btw... point noted :-) but i do like this color.. :p
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Thanks Anju. I welcome you to my buddy list with a big cheer and smile :-)
DeleteBeautiful...though it should not be only for valentine's day :)
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Thanks a ton, Shooting Star. I completely agree with you, every day is the day to express love.. not alone Feb 14th :-)
Deletewelcome to my space.. and do visit again. :-)
a really beautifully composed poem :)
ReplyDeleteHope Valentine's was good for you.
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Thanks so much... Valentine's was kinda ok good to me :-) welcome to my little nibbling home..
DeleteWow, nice dear.
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Thanks Meow.. and Congratulations! your award speech is nice :p
DeleteSuperb... :)
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Deleteahem...ahem...i think i definitely need a party now!! and dare you refure this time...:
ReplyDeletehaha you are so keen to get a treat from me, Arish. but how about nibbling for a cheese promptly? ;) :p
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