‘One…
Two… Three…’
My
mom asked, ‘What are you counting?’
‘Words…
Twelve,
Thirteen, Fourteen…’
She
gave me a puzzling look.
I
continued
‘Twenty-three…
Twenty-four…
My
first flash fiction is getting ready, Ma…
Thirty-five
Thirty-six…
Oh…
it’s tough to write a story with just few words…’ Sigh!
Three
more…
‘Whoa… Fifty-five…!’ J
……………
PS - This is my 55th post... So I made this number 55 as the theme for it.
congrats on completing 55th post and that too in this amazing and unique style Rats !!! Milestones are created to look back to times and feel good about the journey and achievements. :) Happy Blogging dear !!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your lovely comment, mysay.. Have a great week.. :-)
DeleteThats interesting and innovative, congrats for 55th post and 55 worded fiction!
ReplyDelete:)
This idea occurred to me from the conversation I had with my mom while I was counting, trying to edit n then re-edit those words. glad you like it. Thanks dear :-)
DeleteHey congrats on reaching 55 :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad for you're here and dropped your comments. Thanks Amit. do visit again :-)
DeleteHahahah! 55 words on 55 fiction! That's clever!
ReplyDeletethanks valli. :) :)
DeleteNice innovative idea ratty. Btw, can u plz add a 'follow by email' plug to ur blog so that i can subscribe to ur posts.
ReplyDeletethanks Rats.. and done the 'follow by email' option.. thanks for the idea :-)
DeleteGood one!! :)
ReplyDelete:) thanks deepak
DeleteCongrats! Very interesting read.This short fiction is really an out of the box idea.
ReplyDeletedelighted with your comment. thank you so much :)
DeleteVery cute post :) Reminded me how i had made my first 55 :) Congratulations dear :)
ReplyDeletehaha.. almost everyone who writes 55ers must have had this experience.. lol. thanks dear :)
DeleteInteresting...Good one...!!!
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Anjan
Deletecool !
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
thanks.. warm welcome to my space :-)
DeleteCongratulations on your 55 th. heres wishing you many more.
ReplyDeletethanks and welcome to my burrow :)
DeleteIts like abc ! i am inspired to write one ! You wrote a 55 word fiction without writing a story ... that is clever indeed ! congrats on your 55th post !
ReplyDeleteCool.. do write one.. looking forward to read it.. and thanks so much for your wishes, Aziz :-)
Deletemany many congratulations
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteThat's actually out of box and fun to read. Good one Meera :)
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteCongratulations! :)
ReplyDeletethank you :)
Deletecongrats for completeing 55 posts :) Same was with me when I completed my 100th post :) it is really a good post Meera, had fun reading it :)
ReplyDeletehappy to see your comment. thanks Saurabh. :D
Deletecongrats for completing 55 :)
ReplyDeletehad fun reading it :)
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am glad you enjoyed reading it :)
Deletevery clever rat!! well done.
ReplyDeletethanks :)
Deletekaatu mokka di.... me dead :#
ReplyDelete:-/ hmm....
DeleteI think itz look like ek do theen...or pappa kehethein...hindi song
ReplyDeletelol maybe but not exactly, i guess.. :)
DeleteAwesome... never thought 55 fiction be written in such a manner.. too good.. Loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Shrikant for your appreciation. :-)
Deletefunny but enjoyed it .. :)
ReplyDelete:)
Deletecool.. 55th post being a '55 fiction' :) !
ReplyDeletethank you Ashwin :)
DeleteWow you are amazingly creative
Deletethank you Barani. welcome to my space :)
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