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15 Jun 2013

Happy September


A fairy tale, not Once upon a time
But only a few weeks back...
Far far away, there lives September,
A charming girl, dressed in black.

Looking forward to be a stunning bride
Ready to get married in the country side,
Grand wedding round the corner
Sitting bored and worried, like a mourner.

The girl next door with big dreams
Pretending to be a princess in her realms
Only day where she must shine
As the glasses dangle with the wine...

Her frizzy tresses and unfinished dresses
Made her grew sad and stuck with I-Pad
When her little bird brought the WeChat
She invited her friends, for a peppy chat.

Those who lived happily ever after
Came on the line to make her feel better
Ariel teased her from the underwater
And the dancing fishes made her wonder

Giselle’s enchanted singing and designer dresses
Tangled with Rapunzel‘s recipe for beautiful tresses
Alice in her wonderland wide awake,
Wondering, 'where is Aurora?', eating her cake...

Flying with Aladdin in her carpet , Jasmine said,
‘oh, she is always late for the duty,
Our one and only sleeping beauty..!’
They gossiped, they giggled...

While Tiana was frying the yummy food,
Belle was trying to cheer up the mood.
Curious on how a country wedding would be,
Snow White gave the tips of make up and beauty.

 Happy to find a way to get rid of the pimple
Which was spoiling her lovely dimple.
Rubbing her eyes, Aurora peeped in
To share the secret of her beauty sleep...

All girls’ talk grew more fun and deep.
Such a lively chat and singing,
With so much laughter and pinging...
Under the beauty of starry night.

Having Cinderella to plan it right,
And getting the bridesmaids, all perfect...
September’s mood lit up and went to bed,
Listening to the song of her chirping bird...

la la la la...
la la la la...



This is an excerpt from the story of September who is living happily since then...!

I have a thing for this name 'September' ever since my 2nd grade simply because I am a September born. And now I only wish this Happy September could be no one but me…J 

 Hope you enjoyed reading this as much I enjoyed writing it. 
The new way to connect...!!

Thanks to WeChat and Indiblogger to come up with this fun-o-fun topic.

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60 comments:

  1. Ankur Anand15 June 2013 at 09:49

    poetry as smooth as it can be :)

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    1. Rat15 June 2013 at 11:20

      Glad you liked it.. Thanks a lot, Ankur :)

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  2. Ritesh Agarwal15 June 2013 at 19:16

    wow rat....you are pushing the envelope when it comes to creativity...I was thinking about you this morning...I was telling myself that Rat and Bushra are two people who blog about everything (poems, stories, pictures, photography, everything).

    By the way, looks like rats are all September-borns! 3rd September is me ^_^

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:17

      aww.. i am happy to get spoiled with your comments.. but uno i am a Jack of all trades and master of none.. so i am trying my hands at everything and exploring what actually comes to me.. lol thanks so much ratty :)

      and am 20th... happy September ^_^

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  3. Saru Singhal16 June 2013 at 00:01

    That's really sweet and creative. Enjoyed reading it. Good luck dear :)

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:18

      :) thanks dear. happy that you enjoyed :)

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  4. Anonymous16 June 2013 at 13:22

    Was a crisp attempt .. nice one ... best wishes for the contest !!

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:20

      thanks Aziz. and yours was a good read too. :)

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  5. Indrani16 June 2013 at 16:13

    That was cool chat! Nice flow of lines.
    Good luck!

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  6. Malini16 June 2013 at 17:21

    Cute girly story!! Good luck, Rat!

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:21

      yeah.. very girly girly.. glad you liked it. keep visiting :)

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  7. Ankita Singhal16 June 2013 at 20:45

    Hye nice failytale-ish. Good one. All the best :)

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:24

      :) thank you, Ankita.. looking forward to see you here more often :)

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  8. Anonymous17 June 2013 at 04:55

    Never expected such a cool post - GREAT

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:25

      am so delighted with your capital letters.. thanks a lot :)

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  9. Saurabh Chawla17 June 2013 at 15:29

    1st post i came across which is a complete poetry :) that too smoothly written for this prompt :) all the best Meera :)

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    1. Rat17 June 2013 at 21:27

      good to see you here.. and am happy that you enjoyed reading it. thanks Saurabh.. :)

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  10. Megha Saraf17 June 2013 at 23:40

    Fantastic poem! Loved it :)

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  11. Arti18 June 2013 at 14:23

    So many fairies under one roof, wow! I can imagine the laughing and the dancing happening all around. Very beautiful penned, all the best for the contest :)

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    1. Rat18 June 2013 at 17:29

      yeah big thanks to wechat for opening a pathway to bring them under one roof... and thank you a lot for your lovely comment, Arti. :)

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  12. ANJALI.N.KUMAR18 June 2013 at 14:37

    aww! really cute! ma fav fairies in ma fav blog :) as sweet as a poem! luvd it :)

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    1. Rat18 June 2013 at 17:31

      you are so sweet Anju.. thanks so so much for having my blog in your favorite list.. big hugs :-) <3

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  13. Uma Anandane18 June 2013 at 14:55

    Wonderful poem and all Disney themes -liked :)

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  14. Akash Govindarajan18 June 2013 at 16:36

    I am also a September born :D ...The poem is cute (with too much fairy tale girls:P)and I liked the rhyming...Though I did wonder why you didn't come up with dialogues..It would have been more interesting :)...All the best MEERA :)

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    1. Rat18 June 2013 at 17:49

      :-) thank you Akash.. glad to see your comment.

      in fact i dint know it was necessary to write the whole dialogues of the chat session. so i mentioned who, why and what they talk.. plus if you listen to all girl's chat you'll easily get a head spin - with their gossips and all those blah blah blahs.. lol.. but for the sake of a dialogue, i have written one... ^_^

      Stay happy September Boy :-)

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  15. Ankit Seth18 June 2013 at 22:47

    Interesting! Very Creative.. liked it.. All the best! :)

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    1. Rat19 June 2013 at 16:49

      Thanks Ankit. welcome to my space.. am glad you became my blog buddy now :)

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  16. Mana18 June 2013 at 23:14

    Lovely post. Well written. :)

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    1. Rat19 June 2013 at 16:51

      Thank you Manasa. welcome here and keep visiting again :)

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  17. Unknown19 June 2013 at 01:34

    wow !! well written as expected from you di :)

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    1. Rat19 June 2013 at 16:52

      haha what an exaggeration... lol. thanks anyways for dropping by. :)

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  18. the little princess19 June 2013 at 12:13

    im quite like that..still in my fairy tale world!!! a superb poem all rhymy- rhythymy!! loved it!

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    1. Rat19 June 2013 at 16:53

      :) me too.. a fairy tale and a dreamy person. am glad you liked it :)

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  19. Hi20 June 2013 at 12:34

    Very impressive and well written :D
    And I do remember princess September, you brought back memories :D

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    1. Rat21 June 2013 at 11:18

      yea I remember how I used to imagine myself as Princess September.. am delighted that it brought back her to you now again..

      Thanks Harshini. welcome to my home :)

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  20. Ashwin Kumar20 June 2013 at 18:54

    wonderful poem.. :)

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  21. RamesH20 June 2013 at 19:01

    Wat i tot was a borin topic, really sounded good with a poetic entry. wish u to get the top awards, even though my heart lies on one of them. Not for the material price i wished u this, but for others to come and enjoy such a nice article. :P

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    1. Rat21 June 2013 at 11:22

      Thanks so much for your hearty wishes. that shows me how much you enjoyed my lines. Am happy.. Somehow you made my day, Ramesh :)

      Welcome to my blog and I wish you all the very best :)

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  22. The Mukhtiars21 June 2013 at 13:58

    beautifully written

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  23. krista mee21 June 2013 at 19:21

    I have a lot of fun reading your blog... this one is one of my favorites!
    http://whoklmee.blogspot.com/

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    1. Rat21 June 2013 at 22:01

      hey thank you so much W. Happy me...:D

      enjoy your weekend :-)

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  24. Bushra13 July 2013 at 21:08

    Hey Meera i can't believe i missed reading this awesome post of yours! Perfect yaar! Congratulations on your win :D

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  25. Swarnali14 July 2013 at 01:03

    That was a lovely lovely post, very different from the other entries... this one totally deserved to win :) Congrats !! <3 :D :D

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  26. Ritu KT14 July 2013 at 08:24

    Hey Meera, Congratulations your name is in the Sony Smartwatch winners for the WeChat contest :)
    - Ritu KT (Cohost of PADE)

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  27. Manjulika Pramod14 July 2013 at 11:50

    Wow.. this was so sweet n charming..
    U brought the lovable ones together... very creative!
    Congrts for the Smartwatch..

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  28. My Unfinished Life16 July 2013 at 16:05

    we chat poem!! wow!!

    http://www.myunfinishedlife.com

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  29. ekta khetan16 August 2013 at 18:02

    Awww its unique and so beautiful! LOved the way you connected fairy tale characters here!

    www.numerounity.com

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    1. Rat16 August 2013 at 19:09

      glad you loved it. thanks Ekta. keep visiting :)

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  30. caterpillar3 November 2015 at 10:03

    This was a very nice fairy tale....well deserved win!

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    1. Rat3 November 2015 at 22:21

      Thanks for such a lovely complement. :)

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