The waves slapping the shore
And the sun rose up above,
I jogged past him to glance more
Springing with so much of love...
Out of the corner of my eyes
I watched him exercise
Butterflies flying over to fill
The scent of daffodil...
With morning sky so cloudy
And the soft rays sizzling on me
I sat down in the beach
Having my urge beyond the reach...
I started to build the castle in the sand
When he
walked to me asking for my hand
He pulled me
closer and hugged me warm,
While I
safely snuggled inside his arm...
We danced in
the sand dune
Trying to
carry the romantic tune,
He brushed
my lips leaving me stiff and numb...
And I
blushed with my goosebumps.
As he caressed
my cheek
Making me
grow weak,
I felt the
first droplet of rain
When he
whispered, ‘I love you...’ lifting me again.
I smiled in
a little shy
Filled with
passion I can never deny
I craved to
say ‘I love you more’
But it
started to downpour.
Closing my
eyes, my vision was blurred
All went vague, yet my emotions stirred.
Heavy wind pulled
him away
Leaving me
shaky, shiver and sway...
Pouring
heavily on my face, I sigh
And slowly
opened my eyes...
‘Wake up...’
mommy shook me in anger
Carrying a
jug full of water...
‘5 minutes
mom....’ my eyes shut in lazy mellow
While I
snuggled with my soft pillow -
Trying to
catch a glimpse of him,
Sigh... I had
to wake up from my dream...!
loved the romantic touch:) a nice one Meera :)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot, Saurabh :)
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Deleteyou know im not :P
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Deleteonce again you wrote a nice post :)) btw was it really a dream?? :P and i was imagining how rat will blush :P
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ReplyDeletethe romance was superb!
lol thanks... let me read it now :P
DeleteWow Wow that is quite good Romantic Dream you had...Loved the Lines.. :-)
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ReplyDeletethank you sir. :)
DeleteRat, that was really nice! Geetashree
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DeleteReally Beautiful meera! Loved your choice of words :)
ReplyDeletethank a lot Jaseema :)
DeleteBeautiful poem.
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DeleteSo cute poem :) cool
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Deletethis one is brilliant... so cute dear :)
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Deletehw cute...nice:)
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DeleteThis was great.. mostly all love poems are all the same but you have put the details differently. loved it :)
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