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19 Jul 2013

Coco's Nut


This is a story of Coco or you can say, this is a story of the Coconut!
courtesy - Google

 Once upon a time, there lived a little girl, named Coco. With her messy hair and bumpy skin, she left all alone with no friends to play. She reached her teen, where all guys treated her so mean. Coco grew sadder and prayed…

‘Pimple pimple go away
Never come back as I say
God! Help me this day
Make me special in every way.’

God dressed in white, came down in a parachute… handed her the hairy brown nut.

‘A genie inside
Stay by your side…
Wish for health and beauty…
He will grant as it is his duty.’

She wished for beautiful hair… She got it…
She wished for a silky skin… Yes, she got it…
She wished for a healthy figure… Wow, she got that too…

Now looking for a friend to play,  
She went out one bright day
Her new stunning look
Kept the town hooked

Charmed with her smile
News spread every mile.
They asked for the secret
She showed her wonder nut…

Cast with spell,
They called it ‘Coco’s nut…’
She lived merrily with friends
That’s where Coco’s story ends…

And well, that’s how the Coconut story begins… :)

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40 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 July 2013 at 16:35

    very sweet and adorable poem ..super like :)

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 14:56

      glad you super liked it.. thanks jack :)

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  2. jahid19 July 2013 at 17:13

    Excellent Meera. Ur Coconut story reminded me of fairy tales :)

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 14:57

      thank you.. and its nice to see you here, jahid. :)

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  3. The Mukhtiars19 July 2013 at 17:52

    Nice one

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  4. Anonymous19 July 2013 at 18:27

    Hmmm... Now I guess the Coconut came from that "Coco’s nut"...Great PoemStory..loved it.. :-)

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  5. Pooja Mittal19 July 2013 at 19:51

    love that pimple one.... thats what I think when I have pimples..
    keep in touch,
    www.beingbeautifulandpretty.com

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 14:59

      haha me too. guess every girl does that :P

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  6. Anonymous19 July 2013 at 20:35

    I totally loved this post!!! Really great inspiration! tell me if you would like to follow each other! I follow you back for sure - Lots of Love, Kyra♡
    FOLLOW MY BLOG // TELL ME // I FOLLOW YOU BACK!

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 14:59

      thanks Kyra. thanks for dropping by.. looking forward to see you here more often.. happy sunday :)

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  7. Bushra19 July 2013 at 20:56

    Awww! That's sweet :)

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  8. Ankur Anand20 July 2013 at 03:01

    love the pimple line :) .. sweet one !

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  9. TTT20 July 2013 at 08:48

    that was cute !!!!!! it really brought a smile to my face !!! thanks for such a sweet poem

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 15:04

      thanks tomato.. happy you liked it :)

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  10. ANJALI.N.KUMAR20 July 2013 at 13:18

    sweet like you! :)

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  11. Rajesh20 July 2013 at 14:24

    Very creative.

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  12. Anonymous20 July 2013 at 15:52

    Very sweet and wonderful ;)



    I follow you beautiful blog. I hope you will follow me back and I will wait for you in my blog www.gabusiek.blogspot.com

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 15:06

      thanks and welcome to my space.. gabusiek. keep visiting.. :)

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  13. ghosh.surabhi@gmail.com20 July 2013 at 15:56

    cute and innovative :)

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  14. www.lifepartneracademy.com20 July 2013 at 16:09

    Hmm! interesting read.

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  15. the little princess20 July 2013 at 17:50

    quite an imagination that is!! nice!

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  16. Akash Govindarajan20 July 2013 at 21:15

    That sure is a rhyme....I read it like a rhyme lol! :D Very nice....I wonder how u come with rhyming end words !

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    1. Rat21 July 2013 at 15:08

      lol thanks Akash.. rhyming adhuva varudhu :p ;)

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  17. Sri Valli20 July 2013 at 23:50

    Lovely poem Meera and creative too on the wonder nut coconut! :)

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  18. Ashwin Kumar21 July 2013 at 12:48

    wow! that's a sweet poem :)

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  19. Jaseema Farook21 July 2013 at 14:27

    Such an adorable poem+story meera :)

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  20. Anonymous27 July 2013 at 20:52

    That is so nice rat.. (i'll call u that itself, as u wanted ;) )
    Casual and easily likable :)

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