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'Come, Let's go darling...!'
Oops, my eyes came out popping,
As she handed me the list for shopping
I can imagine the scene where I go insane.
From skirts and jeans to chocolates and beans
Every kitchen things to fulfill the need
Gizmos, gadgets and more books to read,
Gifts, jewelry and baby toys make her gay
Oh... At the end, what a tiring day!
I am so exhausted carrying the bags
But casually, she asked me to sit and relax
Standing in the counter to pay the bills
Uff, not finished her purchase still.
As soon as she saw the make-up stuff
She couldn't take her eyes off
As soon as she saw the make-up stuff
She couldn't take her eyes off
I whispered, ‘Can’t it wait till the summer sale?’
Her mind replied me the ‘Buy more...’ tale.
From clutches and coolers to shoes and slipper
Sigh, how could I forget the food for dinner...?
Every shop in the road, we roam
Every shop in the road, we roam
Ignoring my, ‘let’s go home’...
Tender coconut to quench my thirst,
Until my wallet goes empty almost...!
Wonder if I find my time free,
Oh.. when will she end this shopping spree...?
Wonder if I find my time free,
Oh.. when will she end this shopping spree...?
Ha ha! Awesome! :D Beautifully composed :)
ReplyDeletelol thanks Bush. ;-)
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ReplyDeletethank you ali :)
DeleteHey Rat, this is awesome! ;)
ReplyDeletethanks so much Ashwin.. :P
DeleteThat was cool Meera. Nice composition. I just hate shopping :)
ReplyDeletehaha. i hope Anjali is not a shopaholic.. ;-) thanks Jahid for dropping by.. :)
DeleteFun and ratty poem :)
ReplyDeletelol thanks :p
DeleteWow this is too good :D
ReplyDeletethanks Megha :)
DeleteAmazingly written!
ReplyDeletethanks. keep visiting :)
DeleteBeautifully written Meera! I am shopaholic too!
ReplyDeletehaha me too Valli.. thanks dear :)
DeleteHahaha..I guess common story of every Husband or Boyfriend...
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written..
i guess so too.. :P thanks Harsha.
DeleteHa ha ha. My heart goes to the poor man.
ReplyDeletethanks and am happy you enjoyed.. i pity him too :P
Deletehehe, hope u dnt do the same to your husband :/
ReplyDeletehaha.. i cant assure. but will ask him and let you know one day :p ;-)
Deletebeautifully weaved :) .. i second with Ritesh :D
ReplyDeletehehe.. lol thanks :)
Delete:) poor guy!
ReplyDelete:) yeah.. :p
Deleteप्रà¤ावी !!!
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thanks :)
Deletewowww :) your poem is every women's delight :) loved every line of it. If I could bring in my blog here..I could imagine my Shrimati nagging with Shrimaan for shopping :D :D
ReplyDeletevery well written RAT :)
lol i just of thought of that too. poor Amit.. haha :D
Deletekeep visiting Jiggyasa.. am delight with your comment :)
:D That was a fun read...being a shopaholic myself I enjoyed it more :P:D
ReplyDeleteseems you can relate to it too. lol. keep visiting. :)
Deletethe hidden poet ??
ReplyDeletethanks for making me giggle !! awesome work Meera !!
reminds me of my "boyfriend" days .. how I had to take Udhaar from friends to buy presents :)
you're welcome, jack. and am happy that you did enjoy my writing..
Deletehidden poet eh? :( how about pretending like one? :P visit my poetry section, jack.. i think i am trying so hard to pretend ;)
a great experience in a poem. Expressed nicely Meera :)
ReplyDeletehappy to see your comment.. seems you have an experience too.. have fun Saurabh :p
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