At the stroke of midnight…
She was lying in agony.
Husband stood there helpless.
Husband stood there helpless.
Four masked people surrounded with weapons.
One of them came between her legs, holding a sharp tool.
She screamed. Tears rolled down.
She screamed. Tears rolled down.
He reached for her womb and…
Pulled him out…
She smiled feebly.
Baby cried… 'Its a Boy…!'
Happy Tears.
Pulled him out…
She smiled feebly.
Baby cried… 'Its a Boy…!'
Happy Tears.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
PS- Don't miss joining my birthday party. Check out the fun contest details here Nibble Promptly..!
PS- Don't miss joining my birthday party. Check out the fun contest details here Nibble Promptly..!
I loved it. AS I read it I thought of something heinous but the end is so sweet. all the best for the contest.
ReplyDeleteglad you loved it. thank you Kalpana :)
DeleteThe twist at the end is unexpected...
ReplyDeleteGreat write...loved it..:)
thanks Karan. keep visiting :)
DeleteNice end :)
ReplyDeleteDropping by: Writing on the go
thank you Hetal :)
DeleteVery nice, such a twist in such a short write...commendable : www.freepaperbook.com
ReplyDeletethanks Suraj.. welcome to my space.. do visit again :)
Deletecongrats for WOW.
ReplyDeletethanks so much Kalpana :)
DeleteNice composition Meera :)
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Jahid :)
Deletelovely
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteWow!!!
ReplyDeletea wow from you.. i am so glad :)
Delete:)
DeleteGood one.
ReplyDeletethanks Indrani..
DeleteOh ho I seriously thought it to be Robbery and in the end was happy news for all.. :-)
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written Meera.. :-)
oh robbery..? hmm.. ya and i love happy endings.. thank you Harsha :)
DeleteAmazing take on the topic. Loved it entirely.
ReplyDeletethanks and its good to see you here, Neo :)
DeleteAh....That was one good twist :) Loved it...
ReplyDeletetwist.. yup.. glad you loved it.. thanks Akash :)
DeleteBeautiful lines..:-)
ReplyDeletethanks nagini. good to see you here :)
DeleteHaha! OMG! Lovely Meera! Loved it to the core! :D
ReplyDeleteglad you loved it that much. thanks Bushra :)
DeleteNice :)
ReplyDeletethanks Shail :)
DeleteNice one
ReplyDeletethanks Deepak :)
DeleteOMG! My mind was going in a totally different direction there. I got whiplash with the sudden turn of events. Haha! Great job!
ReplyDeletehaha that was the idea Vashti. am glad you enjoyed it. big smiles here :) :)
DeleteA bizarre story, I thought. Was consoled when I came to the end.
ReplyDeletehmm :)
Deletenice read,interesting end
ReplyDeletethanks.. :)
DeleteDamn....the twist almost gave me an attack...like the way ure brin works...wonderful :D
ReplyDeletethrilled with your comment. thank you and keep visiting :)
DeleteO boy!! I am relieved!! Was scared it was going to be a horrid tale.Well done!
ReplyDeletehaha.. its one happy ending. thanks Sfurti. :)
DeleteSuperbly written.. :) What a twist !!!
ReplyDeletedelighted with your comment. thank you. keep coming to my space. :)
Deletewowow!! post :) for me
ReplyDeletehey Ankur.. am so thrilled with your wowow.. thanks a lot. :)
Deletesuperlike!!
ReplyDeletethanks Arish.. :)
DeleteLovely twist.
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping by, Suresh. :)
Deletethis one is sweet! unexpected! luvly :)
ReplyDeletethank you Anju :)
DeleteFirst few lines and I felt it was about the Delhi rape case and at the end it was nice to see the tears of joy that every mother enjoys, whats also known as the agony and the ecstasy. Wom, simply wow.
ReplyDeleteya a mixture of agony n ecstasy.. thanks a lot for dropping by :)
DeleteAh!! What a twist! Touching one Meera! :)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot valli.. glad you liked it.... :)
Delete