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29 Sep 2013

Oh my sweet little thing...


Oh there you are my sweet little thing
Drenched in the coat of snowy piping
Evil, enticing and devilishly sweet,
Here comes my delicious treat...

Inside me, a hungry tone
Wide opened eyes, I see you gone
Greedy me, this ain't suffice 
As I give you my full price

Now devoured in my whim
Urging to work you off in the gym
Chocolate brownie with whipped icing,
Oh there you are my sweet little thing.


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32 comments:

  1. Akash Govindarajan29 September 2013 at 12:22

    Perfect :D

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  2. Suganya29 September 2013 at 12:43

    sweeetttttt :D :D :D

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  3. Anonymous29 September 2013 at 12:43

    Yummy Yummy Poem Meera...Chocolate Cakes are really very tempting and I so love them..
    Lovely Lines Meera.. :)

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    1. Rat30 September 2013 at 11:39

      glad you enjoyed my lines. thanks a lot Harsha :)

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  4. Ashwin Kumar29 September 2013 at 13:39

    excellent!

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  5. ANJALI.N.KUMAR29 September 2013 at 14:29

    woww! excellent! itz really yummy! i just felt the creamy chocolate! awesome work dear!

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  6. Arish Dhawan29 September 2013 at 14:32

    perfectly yummy sweet little thing ;)

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    1. Rat30 September 2013 at 11:43

      yea and devilishly sweet little thing :P

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  7. Ankur Anand29 September 2013 at 15:12

    woww.. excellent !

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  8. Pooja Mittal29 September 2013 at 16:22

    Yummy words... Fab poem
    Keep in touch,
    www.beingbeautifulandpretty.com

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  9. Bushra29 September 2013 at 18:15

    Yummalicious composition Meera :-)

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  10. Unknown29 September 2013 at 20:00

    Delicious composition :)

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    1. Rat30 September 2013 at 11:46

      good to see your comment. thank you Sammya :)

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  11. Rajesh30 September 2013 at 00:41

    Nice one . I like it.

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  12. Vashtiqvega4330 September 2013 at 10:19

    Love it! I was salivating as I read your poem. Yum! :D

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    1. Rat30 September 2013 at 11:48

      haha.. am delighted that it made an effect in you :D

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  13. jahid1 October 2013 at 00:54

    Nice composition Meeeraaa :) choc and cake looks yummy but can't have much :)

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    1. Rat1 October 2013 at 10:35

      thanks Jahid.. but i jus love choco cakes. :)

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  14. Najmun2 October 2013 at 12:51

    Sinfully delicious poem. Exactly my thoughts when I see a tempting piece of chocolate cake :D ...Lovely poem :-)

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  15. Rat2 October 2013 at 17:57

    glad you enjoyed my lines. thanks a lot Najm. welcome to my buddy list :)

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  16. Indrani2 October 2013 at 22:07

    I enjoyed his poem :)
    Great pic for it.

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  17. Ritesh Agarwal3 October 2013 at 12:04

    Sweet. The final few lines were really well penned

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