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31 Dec 2013

Falling In Love



Strange feeling creeps inside him
As she walks with a shy smile.
Her kohl filled eyes speak a lot today,
Asking is she looking good.
Stunned by her elegant beauty,
He nods smilingly…
While he is left alone in that crowd,
Watching his best friend getting married.
Too late to realize what he's losing…
Wishing You All A Very Happy New Year!
God Bless!

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24 comments:

  1. Pooja Mittal31 December 2013 at 21:16

    Happy New Year
    Kisses
    www.beingbeautifulandpretty.com

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  2. Indrani31 December 2013 at 21:19

    Good one.

    Happy New Year to you!

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  3. Ragini Puri31 December 2013 at 21:31

    Realization dawned...but late. Sigh.
    Beautiful poem. :)

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  4. Leanne Dyck31 December 2013 at 22:34

    Beautiful. Tender. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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  5. Akash Govindarajan31 December 2013 at 23:37

    Happy New 2014 :)

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  6. Renard Moreau1 January 2014 at 00:00

    [ Smiles ] That was a beautiful poem and do have yourself a fabulous 2014!

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  7. magiceye1 January 2014 at 06:08

    That was beautiful!

    Wish you and yours a brilliant 2014!!

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  8. Paresh Kale1 January 2014 at 08:10

    superbly described. BTW, a very happy new year to you and your readers :-)

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  9. Ashwin Kumar1 January 2014 at 09:43

    Beautiful post to start the year..! Happy 2014 ;)

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  10. Aayesha Hakim1 January 2014 at 12:02

    beautiful, so less words, still aptly described! loved the 55 word story :D

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  11. Richa Singh1 January 2014 at 13:33

    Beautiful words. The story held me till the end, and funny can be a reality for many...

    Richa

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  12. ANJALI.N.KUMAR1 January 2014 at 13:46

    Beautiful!! a great start for 2014!! just loved it! nd yaa Happie New Year :)

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  13. Namrota1 January 2014 at 19:19

    *sigh*.. if only...
    Beautifully written Meera :D

    Have a wonderful 2014 :)

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  14. Sammya brata Mullick1 January 2014 at 19:34

    Ahan, I could sense that love is in the air! :D
    Let's reciprocate this feeling in the year 2014.

    Regards
    Sammya

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  15. Jyotsna Bhatia2 January 2014 at 11:35

    'Sigh' 'Sigh' .. Well written Meera :)

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  16. Seawind Solution2 January 2014 at 14:28

    Thanks for posting this wonderful words...
    ELALA

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  17. a Rat2 January 2014 at 22:09

    Thanks everyone for dropping by and liked this little read. Wishes. :)

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  18. Alka Narula2 January 2014 at 22:23

    hmmmm you know its an art to convey the feelings through few words and you hav done it .

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  19. Brendan Dabhi3 January 2014 at 22:33

    Wow, what a weave! Brilliant!
    And a happy New Year to you!

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  20. Sri Valli4 January 2014 at 10:54

    The last line is hitting!! Lovely 55 Rat!

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  21. Vashti Q-Vega6 January 2014 at 09:16

    Such longing and pining demonstrated in so few words. I love it! Happy New Year!

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  22. anitaexplorer7 January 2014 at 19:31

    Lovely 55-word poem dear :) Our gain! No loss :)

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  23. Ankur Anand12 January 2014 at 18:17

    lovely 55 ..is there any connection ? :D

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  24. Aayesha Hakim20 April 2015 at 18:12

    Oh no :(

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