You cast me under the spell
Making my mind go twirled
Your smile had so much to tell
Your smile had so much to tell
Driven me into a fantasy world
Trapped in emotions I wanted to yell
My head said No No
My head said No No
But my heart rang the bell.
Every time I thought of you...
Every time I thought of you...
Dream was where I used to dwell
It was you Mr. Ryan Gosling
Who made my eyes swell,
As if you were my Prince Charming...
Being a crazy stupid lover,
You had been my huge crush
Watching you in the shower,
Once you even made me blush...
Mister Boyfriend grew jealous as ever
And sported a look like you
Now his clean shaven look bowled me over
Time to stop my cravings with you...
His naughtiness that I have seen
The mischief behind his tempting smile,
His voice lusciously serene
That lulls me all awhile...
His gaze makes me melt
Breath carries the sensuous touch
Wrapping his hands around my belt
Standing and kissing as such...
Titillates my senses, making me shy
His hug so gentle and warm
The comfort I can never deny
Hooks me with his boyish charm
Allures me to lift my veil
Having no more stubble to harm,
Life becomes a happily ever after tale...!
Hi Meera, you are third on my list. I have to acknowledge two more tags first. Will let you know once I do :)
ReplyDeletelooking forward to your one more creative writing :)
DeleteAs always the poem is too good :) All the best
ReplyDeletethanks Akash :)
Deletethat's a really beautiful and a bit naughty expression Meera.. I feel sorry for Ryan Gosling :)
ReplyDeletehaha.. thanks Deepak for your lovely comment and am glad its coming from a poet himself. :)
DeleteReally nice poem, Meera! Aptly highlights the clean-shaven look's advantages! :)
ReplyDeleteBest wishes for the Contest!
Thank you so much for accepting and responding to my Tag.
I always knew you'd compose yet another delightful & creative entry like this! :)
thanks Anita. happy that you find it nice :)
DeleteLoved the poem Meera. I wish I could write as well as you. Every time I attempt to write a poem, I end up focusing on the rhyming scheme rather than the thought and it turns out pathetic :(
ReplyDeleteWill have to keep practicing I guess. :)
while I see your posts quite creative n different, I am glad that you appreciate my little try.. that's so kind of you to say this, Khushboo. means a lot to me. thanks dear. :)
DeleteRyan Gosling wore a stubble in Notebook I remember ;p
ReplyDeletelol but not in many movies :p
DeleteGreat lines. Good flow of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Indrani :)
DeleteLoved your poem! So you are participating in this prompt too..will tag you soon :)
ReplyDeletethanks Uma :)
DeleteI have 2 more tags pending. I dono if I can manage more tags but surely will try. :P
it is a brilliant take ,fabulous poem
ReplyDeletethank you so much cifar. glad you liked it :)
Deletewow! a luvley cutie poem! itz really beautiful as always i must add ;) luvley. All the best!
ReplyDeletethanks dear. you always make me smile big with your lovely comments :)
DeleteLovely poem :) and brilliant attempt
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteRyan Gosling, huh? Not bad. Ha,ha! I loved the poem. Sweet and HOT. ;D
ReplyDeletehehe.. thanks so much Vashti. glad you enjoyed.. :D
Deletewow! Top post huh? congrats :D
ReplyDeletelol yeah.. thanks Ashwin :)
DeleteWow! a good one and it really deserves to be a top post on indiblogger. All the best Meera :)
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it. thanks, Saurabh :)
DeleteLovely lines Meera...apt to the prompt! Thanks for coming to my blog too :)
ReplyDeleteI have tagged you in my post buddy The Marriage Conversation .Hope you will acknowledge it !
thanks Uma. that was a nice conversation... :) will see if i can accept your tag. :)
DeleteAccepted your tag and tried to write a poem. :) http://munniofalltrades.blogspot.in/2013/12/daughter-my-kryptonite.html
ReplyDeletethanks Khushboo :)
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