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22 Dec 2013

The Night Affair


Scene 1

With a cool attitude, he walked inside the party hall. As he settled in the couch, an over made-up girl wearing a skimpy dress sat next to him and started stroking his face. Shoving her away, he grabbed the drink and glanced at the pulsating scene of the dance floor. He almost lost his vibe as none perked his interest. That’s when he spotted her sitting alone in the bar counter with a drink in her hand. He felt she was the one.

Scene 2

 He walked towards her and asked, ‘Hey wanna dance?’ Her jaw dropped as she turned to look at him. His clean shaven look bowled her over. She gazed at his eyes and nodded as if she was hypnotized. He grabbed her hands and took her to the dance floor. While they were dancing to the soft number, he gently kissed her. It was just a fraction of second but she felt as if it lasted an eternity. When he broke the kiss, she stood there with her closed eyes and her lips craving for more. ‘Come with me’ he whispered. Mesmerized by his charm, she followed.

Scene 3

Hanging the ‘Do not disturb’ tag in the knob, he shut the door behind and saw her sitting in the bed nervously. Something in her kept tantalizing him. He couldn't control himself. He pushed her and slowly started to unbutton her. As it was her first time, she covered herself shyly and letting him explore her. He hugged and kissed her bare shoulders. He lifted her hips and tightened his grip... His teeth gently buried in her neckline.... She cried out loud. Feeling the pleasure and pain together, she rested in his arms tiredly... Brushing her hair away, he smiled, 'You are my girl now...'

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

This post is a part of the Protest Against Unclean Stubble Activity in association with BlogAdda.

I am accepting tag from Sarav.

Wait for the Climax... ;)

 The Night Affair - The Climax.

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43 comments:

  1. Cifar22 December 2013 at 18:16

    well done,I have also combined my previous two WOW entries with PASS. I think for PASS you are required to tag people to be eligible for your points.

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    1. Rat22 December 2013 at 19:36

      Thanks Cifar. but I think those extra points will credit only if the tagged people responds na. thats why I just left it this time. will try to tag some more friends in my next post. :)

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  2. Vanish Girl22 December 2013 at 19:36

    Great post :)

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  3. kalpana solsi22 December 2013 at 20:18

    I loved the way you have combined the prompts. waiting for the finale.well-written.

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    1. Rat23 December 2013 at 22:53

      thanks Kalpana.. will post it tomorrow :)

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  4. Tarun Singh22 December 2013 at 20:33

    Hi,nice post.I have tagged you here in His Clean Shaven Look Bowled Neeta Over ! . Hope you will acknowledge me in your next post :)

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    1. Rat23 December 2013 at 22:56

      thanks Tarun for the tag. will try to write but not sure. :)

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  5. Anita Sabat22 December 2013 at 20:43

    Felt like a movie, Meera :)
    Nice combo of the prompts. Even I tried the same :)
    Best wishes!

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    1. Rat23 December 2013 at 22:57

      thanks Anita. I read your post too. it was good :)

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  6. Anonymous22 December 2013 at 20:58

    it is very nice- http://goodiformation.blogspot.in/

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  7. Saurabh Chawla22 December 2013 at 21:59

    Waiting for the climax. :) Scenes are perfectly woven :)

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    1. Rat23 December 2013 at 23:06

      thanks Saurabh. good to see you are here :)

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  8. Akash Govindarajan22 December 2013 at 22:05

    Personally I feel this post is better than the other two posts :-P :-)

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  9. Richa Singh22 December 2013 at 22:12

    Ahem ahem This one is super hot!! Sizzling :D

    Richa

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  10. ANJALI.N.KUMAR23 December 2013 at 11:03

    aahhaa this one seems too good! :) waiting for more! :)

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    1. Rat23 December 2013 at 23:18

      haha thanks dear.. will post the sequel tomorrow :)

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  11. The Mukhtiars23 December 2013 at 18:33

    Awesome one

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  12. Vashtiqvega4324 December 2013 at 00:41

    Very nice! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to take a cold shower. Ha,ha!

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  13. Manjulika Pramod24 December 2013 at 12:50

    The excitement is growing...
    Hey, I have tagged u in my post..

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    1. Rat24 December 2013 at 13:17

      lol thanks Manju.. having few more pending tags, I will try to acknowledge yours if I get some interesting idea to write on the same topic :)

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  14. Saru Singhal24 December 2013 at 13:50

    O' lala... I have no idea about the prompts but this post is steaming hot Meera.

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    1. Rat24 December 2013 at 19:10

      haha.. its always good to see you here Saru :)

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  15. Unknown9 January 2014 at 18:23

    Lovely....best of luck for the contest :)

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    1. Rat10 January 2014 at 18:04

      Thanks a lot Pankti :)
      Dont forget to read the sequel too.. :P

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