Hey Rat,
I have readied a 'spoof' on
your story 'Sshh.. Secret', with a 'twist'. I hope that you don't take this
seriously as I prepared this just for fun..! :P
I have got this mail from one of my blogger friends ‘The Writer’ Ashwin
of My World... My Words, who has written this short story with an extra twist
in the tale based on my first 55 word story - Sshh.. Secret. I enjoyed reading his Top Secret even though the end was unfavorable to me. Then I asked him to let me have it as a guest post and so here it is. Thank you, Ashwin.
I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I did.
TOP SECRET
Jamie asked for the 100th
time, ‘why big fuss... tell me your password?’
Rolled my eyes, I said
‘Don’t ask again. It’s secret’.
She frowned :-/ ‘As if
it’s a top secret…’
‘No top secret baby… but
let it remain secret’, I winked.
When she left, I smiled to
myself and typed my system password…
sEcrEt.
To
my surprise, it threw an error message ‘password invalid, please enter a valid
password’
A few
minutes earlier
Jamie
asked for the 99th time, ‘tell me your password?’
I
said, ‘It’s secret’.
Jamie
sat there irritated while I left the place to purchase some groceries at the supermarket.
Meanwhile…
Jamie
sat there staring at the computer. All she wanted to know was the password and
she figured out a way to retrieve it. She rushed to her cupboard and found a
disc which had ‘Windows 7 installation disc’ written on it. She opened the DVD
drive and put the disc into it. She rebooted the system and made a quick
reinstallation of the operating system. At the end of the installation a dialog
box appeared asking to set the password. Jamie, with a smile on her face, typed
‘you don’t mess with me’ in the
password box.
Present…
‘Password
invalid, please enter a valid password’
sEcrEt
‘Password
invalid, please enter a valid password’
sEcrEt
System
crashed!!
THE END
Great job Ashwin..BT aRat's secret is nomore a secret nw :D
ReplyDeletehahaha... yeah, it is no more a 'secret; now :P
DeleteHey Rat, thanks for sharing this post.. :) :)
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteHahahaha :D
ReplyDeleteHehehe...nice! :)
ReplyDelete[ Laughs ] Oh, I enjoyed that one!
ReplyDeleteHa,ha,ha! You two! I enjoyed this a lot. :) xx
ReplyDeleteEveryone's curious about passwords!
ReplyDeleteSad that the system crashed. When mine did, I lost some of my kid's pics & trip photos... When system crashes, even if we know the right password, no good!
Nice story & creatively expressed, Meera :)
I have tagged you for the PASS activity. Pl chk out my Post-
ReplyDeletehttp://anitaexplorer.blogspot.in/2013/12/bollywood-stubble-songs-for-pass.html
Do respond and let me know your acceptance & share the link! :)
hey thanks dear for the tag.. sure will join the chain soon, inshaallah :)
DeleteNice hah! So Secret unveiled? ;)
ReplyDeleteNice one..secret revealed...:-D
ReplyDeleteHaha, Amuses me with a smile :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice! :)
Just like this, I have written a short story. It would be very kind if you could review it :)
http://captiveofthoughts.blogspot.in/2013/06/the-unfulfilled-promise-some-stories.html
Because I believe, some stories are better left incomplete :)
ya somethings are better left unsaid... i sure will read your post. thanks for your lovely comment, Tanishq :)
Delete@Arish @Sammya @Maniparna - Secret revealed nahin... but security breached and my system crashed... so unfair.. :'(
ReplyDeletethanks everyone for dropping by and am glad you all enjoyed this read :)
lol :P
DeleteThat's a nice way forward. Good job ashwin
ReplyDeleteGood job .. ashwin .. :) @rat .. have posted the somewhat english version of that poem .. Hoping you will like it :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha.. Good job Ashwin.. Good one Rat!! I have tagged you here for a BlogAdda's contest. Hope you will accept it.
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
hahaha Aswin! sucha great job! i was really laughing after reading this! Meera...this is an awesome post!
ReplyDeleteHahahah! Good story! I enjoyed reading this :)
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