Living in the dark, I'm torn between my lust and desire...
Smitten by your beauty, I hold and protect you with a possessive touch...
And whispering sweet nothings to you, my beloved grudge...
Bitten by my greed, I wonder if it is your love or my obsession...
Yet you are the sole reason for my survival,
For I am Gollum and you are My Precious...!
Aaaah......Lord of the rings....wonderful trilogy....one of the most interesting characters in the series....MY PRECIOUS! Love the wrong english spoken by him :D Hobbitsees
ReplyDeletelol thanks.. and yeah he is one of my favorite characters in that series too.. :)
Deletepreciously written !
ReplyDeletethanks Ankur.. good to see you around.. :)
Deletenicely worded. super
ReplyDeletethank you Amar :)
DeleteHey Rat, this one is awesome!
ReplyDeletehey thanks a lot Ashwin :)
DeleteLovely one, Meera, as usual.
ReplyDeleteIt's tough to express so much within just a few words with such a Topic- Love...
But, then Love needs no words! :)
(P.S- We have to write in 5 sentences...)
So true.. love need no words to express but can only be felt.. thanks so much for your lovely comment, Anita.. :)
Deletebtw i wrote the last two lines as one sentence separated with a comma.. well if you meant that.. :)
I could hear him say it wickedly... "My Preciousssss" :D
ReplyDeleteFantastic composition Meera :)
lol thanks a lot Nam :D
DeleteLovely verses...
ReplyDeletethanks Bush. its always good to see you here :)
DeleteA wonderful read indeed!!! :)
ReplyDeletethanks Harshita. keep visiting :)
DeleteThe lines have a deeper meaning...
ReplyDeleteLovely lines meera!
thank you Najm :)
DeleteSo creative!
ReplyDeletethanks Shaivi :)
DeleteThese are very dark lines. You might find this amusing but I even made a sinister tune to go with it.
ReplyDeleteyea these lines depict the dark obsessive love. and this Gollum could be anyone who is obsessive of something or someone. thanks Brendan. :)
DeleteLovely one
ReplyDeletethanks Ali :)
DeleteAn altogether different take. Creative, Rat!
ReplyDeleteKudos!!!
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)
Thanks so much, Surbhi :)
Deletelovely read.
ReplyDeletethanks Kalpana :)
DeleteVery "to the point".
ReplyDeleteThe message conveyed.
Thanks Indrani :)
DeleteHas a much deeper meaning than when you first skim through it...
ReplyDeleteLovely...
Thanks for the read. keep visiting :)
Deletebrings back memories from the movie...wonderful
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping by. keep visiting :)
DeleteI love it! Lord of the Rings! Very cool!
ReplyDeleteglad you loved it.. thanks Vashti :)
Deleteah! nice! Love is so in the air! Short and sweet! Liked it.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Titli.. good to see you here after a long time :)
DeleteOhh wow !! in a weird way I think I like Gollum! ;)
ReplyDeleteYeah he impress me in some way too :)
DeleteBeautiful Meera!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sfruti :)
Deletewoww!!! awesome! perfectly written :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much dear :)
DeleteLoved the last line Meera, it made me smile. :)
ReplyDeleteglad you loved it, khushboo :)
Deletebeautifully penned Meera :)
ReplyDeleteGlad u liked it, Jyotsna :)
Deletereading it again still felt the same preciousness and freshness :)
ReplyDeletegood to hear that from you, Ankur. thanks :)
DeleteHi Meera! I love Lord of the Rings. I really enjoyed this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Vashti :)
DeleteI liked the composition ...keep sharing !
ReplyDeleteMeans a lot to me Alka. Thanks. Keep visiting :)
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