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12 Jan 2014

A Precious Love


Living in the dark, I'm torn between my lust and desire...

Smitten by your beauty, I hold and protect you with a possessive touch...

And whispering sweet nothings to you, my beloved grudge...

Bitten by my greed, I wonder if it is your love or my obsession...

 Yet you are the sole reason for my survival,

For I am Gollum and you are My Precious...!


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.


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  1. Akash Govindarajan12 January 2014 at 23:35

    Aaaah......Lord of the rings....wonderful trilogy....one of the most interesting characters in the series....MY PRECIOUS! Love the wrong english spoken by him :D Hobbitsees

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    1. Rat13 January 2014 at 17:37

      lol thanks.. and yeah he is one of my favorite characters in that series too.. :)

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  2. Ankur Anand13 January 2014 at 01:02

    preciously written !

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    1. Rat13 January 2014 at 17:38

      thanks Ankur.. good to see you around.. :)

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  3. Anonymous13 January 2014 at 09:29

    nicely worded. super

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  4. Ashwin Kumar13 January 2014 at 09:58

    Hey Rat, this one is awesome!

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  5. Dr. Anita Sabat13 January 2014 at 10:00

    Lovely one, Meera, as usual.
    It's tough to express so much within just a few words with such a Topic- Love...
    But, then Love needs no words! :)
    (P.S- We have to write in 5 sentences...)

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    1. Rat13 January 2014 at 17:43

      So true.. love need no words to express but can only be felt.. thanks so much for your lovely comment, Anita.. :)
      btw i wrote the last two lines as one sentence separated with a comma.. well if you meant that.. :)

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  6. Namrota13 January 2014 at 10:00

    I could hear him say it wickedly... "My Preciousssss" :D

    Fantastic composition Meera :)

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  7. Bushra13 January 2014 at 10:34

    Lovely verses...

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    1. Rat13 January 2014 at 17:45

      thanks Bush. its always good to see you here :)

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  8. Harshita Srivastava13 January 2014 at 10:51

    A wonderful read indeed!!! :)

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  9. Najmun13 January 2014 at 14:18

    The lines have a deeper meaning...
    Lovely lines meera!

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  10. Shaivi13 January 2014 at 14:52

    So creative!

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  11. Brendan Dabhi13 January 2014 at 15:54

    These are very dark lines. You might find this amusing but I even made a sinister tune to go with it.

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    1. Rat13 January 2014 at 17:50

      yea these lines depict the dark obsessive love. and this Gollum could be anyone who is obsessive of something or someone. thanks Brendan. :)

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  12. Unknown13 January 2014 at 17:47

    Lovely one

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  13. Surbhi Bafna13 January 2014 at 17:57

    An altogether different take. Creative, Rat!
    Kudos!!!

    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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  14. kalpana solsi13 January 2014 at 19:35

    lovely read.

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  15. Indrani14 January 2014 at 07:48

    Very "to the point".
    The message conveyed.

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  16. The Wanderer14 January 2014 at 12:09

    Has a much deeper meaning than when you first skim through it...
    Lovely...

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  17. the factfiction14 January 2014 at 17:25

    brings back memories from the movie...wonderful

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    1. Rat14 January 2014 at 18:51

      thanks for dropping by. keep visiting :)

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  18. Vashtiqvega4316 January 2014 at 08:58

    I love it! Lord of the Rings! Very cool!

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  19. the little princess28 January 2014 at 16:24

    ah! nice! Love is so in the air! Short and sweet! Liked it.

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    1. Rat28 January 2014 at 18:29

      thanks a lot Titli.. good to see you here after a long time :)

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  20. Nabanita6 February 2014 at 21:31

    Ohh wow !! in a weird way I think I like Gollum! ;)

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  21. Unknown13 April 2014 at 18:16

    Beautiful Meera!

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  22. ANJALI.N.KUMAR13 April 2014 at 18:20

    woww!!! awesome! perfectly written :) :)

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  23. Khushboo13 April 2014 at 18:54

    Loved the last line Meera, it made me smile. :)

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  24. Jyotsna Bhatia13 April 2014 at 22:25

    beautifully penned Meera :)

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  25. Ankur Anand14 April 2014 at 00:20

    reading it again still felt the same preciousness and freshness :)

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    1. Rat14 April 2014 at 11:13

      good to hear that from you, Ankur. thanks :)

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  26. Vashtiqvega4315 April 2014 at 09:38

    Hi Meera! I love Lord of the Rings. I really enjoyed this one!

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  27. Unknown24 April 2014 at 17:56

    I liked the composition ...keep sharing !

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    1. Rat25 April 2014 at 00:15

      Means a lot to me Alka. Thanks. Keep visiting :)

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