This post is a BlogAdda's Tangy Tuseday Pick
'Those ramblings of mind are too lovely and pleasant to let them just pass by. Especially if you are a thinker whose mind just refuses to keep quite. It is wondrous to see how beautifully these thoughts create a story. Imagination has no directions or boundaries. Meera just penned down her creative musings and it is a must read.'
I have a world inside me
Where my
imaginations come alive
Creativity
spills out of my hand
Like cascading
waterfalls,
My thoughts
paint colorful pictures
On the plain
white canvas
You too can
view them through my words
Don’t close
your eyes, get ready to see.
Can you spot a
rat jumping in joy?
Get a sneak
peak of the world I build
With the
characters oozing out of my mind…
A Big fat rat
skating in the mountain of cheese
And nibbling
those yummy chocolate brownies
For once, a
rat that won’t let you scream.
In my little
world of fantasy,
Leave your
worries behind and enjoy the show.
Can you
identify what is real and what is not?
Butterflies
paint the sky with strokes of rainbow
And float over
the field of tulips and roses
Look over the
meadow and see the view
Black
Stallions galloping in a splendid backdrop…
Oh, life
becomes a wildest dream
With little
details out of my imagination
Hold on to
your seats, there’s plenty to see..
Keep on looking,
don’t stop here
Can you see
the lion king lying in the valley,
After munching
his tasty lunch?
Or a fluffy
sloth in tux standing next to him
Picking his
tooth with straw strand?
Rub your eyes
and see
What seems
just not real…
Wait, my
imagination is just getting warmed up.
Icy cold, the
weather now freezes you
A mammoth
dresses in his Eskimo suit
Just jumps out
of my hand
And almost
lands on your head
Snatching it
real fast, I think,
I catch
something new snuggling inside my palm
Tightly
wrapped, wanna take a peep inside?
Now hold your
seat and look closer…
Backdrop turns
to clear blue skies
Sun shines
bright and twitches your eyes
Exciting,
Enticing, Appealing and what not?
Can you see
everything is apparently so real?
This is my
world, all that you see
Fantasy or
not, but whatever you believe is true.
Ready to take
a look at what is in my closed hand?
Welcome to my
world of imagination…
I just caught
you!
Fantastic fantasy land. I could actually visualize the rat and the lion king.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my characters. Thanks Somali :)
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteA 'visual' experience!!! YAM xx
I'm glad you enjoyed the experience Yam :)
DeleteSo beautifully penned Rat. In all, it's a lovely amalgam of feelings & emotions. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your lovely comment Maitreni. :)
Deletewhat awesome imagery!!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you here, Titli. keep visiting!
Deletevisuals were flashing in front of my eyes as I was reading it. 'Whatever you believe is true' I agree with this statement
ReplyDeleteI am happy you could visualize it well. Thanks so much, Shayar. :)
DeleteSo beautifully blog......
ReplyDeleteThank You :)
DeleteHello! What a beautiful poem! Great imagery! You did catch me, your words were a joy to read. :D xx
ReplyDeleteThanks Vasthi! I'm happy to share my joy with you. xx :)
DeleteAnd it is a fantastic world.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my world, Mridula :)
DeleteCongratulations! Your blog post was selected in Tangy Tuesday Picks edition on 27-10-2015 at BlogAdda. Cheers :)
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DeleteNow I'm lost in that wonderful, random imagery of yours... Loved every bit of it! A great read after a tiring day. Thanks :)
ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure to catch a reader like you, Vanessa. I'm glad. :)
DeleteWOW!! What a flow of words od the dream and imagination. I felt as if i 'm viewing it thorough your words!!! Superb!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you could see the visuals through my words. Thank you for your lovely comment, Tina! :)
DeleteThank you for sharing your inside world.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read Victoria. :)
DeleteWow! Truly captivating :D :D
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to have caught your attention Sanaa. keep visiting :)
DeleteVery clever!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary. :)
Deletevery colourful and rich imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Natasa. Welcome to my space. :)
DeleteExcellent! Such a story-teller too! I didn't like imagining the rat, but every other one of the "characters oozing out " of your mind caught me up.You made me look.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan. I'm glad you looked. Welcome to this Rat's burrow ;) :P
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