I want to live. I want to live badly.
But it spread inside me. It consumed my body wholly. Yesterday I was well, but today I am fighting for my survival. I know spending this one night is going to be harder than ever. I am lying on my bed all alone. I couldn't raise my head. The pain is suffocating me. Nobody cares to be around. My bedside table is filled with medications. But if only I get an antidote. My heart started beating high, letting my body drench in sweat. I am not able to breathe. I want to live. I want to live badly. I heard a creaking noise. The door opened and my mother entered. As she sits near my dying body and brushes my hair,
'Amma, will I survive this?', my voice breaks.
'Amma, will I survive this?', my voice breaks.
'Dei, it's just a COLD!'
This was a great read! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the read, Purba :)
DeleteI would've forced tulsi chai down your throat to drown the morosness of the cold lolzzzz cute
ReplyDeleteI would love that... :P
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ReplyDeleteHe He :P
Delete:) best time to get pampered!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is... Thank you Deepak Ji :)
Deletecold is really bad , nice read
ReplyDeleteyeah, it is the worse short term illness. thanks for the read, Shayar :)
DeleteLolmax ! Nice one Meera!! :D
ReplyDeleteI think I caught you there ;)
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ReplyDeleteMy favorite from the list is "Engima"..but more than anything else Moon injecting the earth with rosy slumber is superb.
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Amit
Thank you for surfning my posts... Keep visiting Amit :)
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ReplyDeleteGreat post i like the way you have explained
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Shahid
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DeleteOh this is so sweet. Amma would make sure the Rat is soon hale and hearty. :-)
ReplyDeleteyeah, Amma is the best! :)
DeleteWell, that was one nice dramatic, thrilling read. I love your writing style.
ReplyDeleteBtw, if you're cold next time try some Ginger tea.
I'm glad you enjoyed the thrill.. I love Ginger Tea. :P
DeleteThanks Kish :)
I feeling thrill after reading this piece of text. This is called short but effective writing.
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Radhika
Thank You Radhika for enjoying the thrill. welcome to my space. :)
DeleteTHAT was a nice one....:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Caterpillar. Welcome to my burrow. Hope you enjoy my nibbles :)
DeleteNicely written. Thanks for the share mr. RAT :D
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