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6 Oct 2015

The Survival




I want to live. I want to live badly.

But it spread inside me. It consumed my body wholly. Yesterday I was well, but today I am fighting for my survival. I know spending this one night is going to be harder than ever. I am lying on my bed all alone. I couldn't raise my head. The pain is suffocating me. Nobody cares to be around. My bedside table is filled with medications. But if only I get an antidote. My heart started beating high, letting my body drench in sweat. I am not able to breathe. I want to live. I want to live badly. I heard a creaking noise. The door opened and my mother entered. As she sits near my dying body and brushes my hair,

 'Amma, will I survive this?', my voice breaks.

'Dei, it's just a COLD!'

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  1. purba chakraborty6 October 2015 at 23:34

    This was a great read! :)

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  2. Sweet7 October 2015 at 00:12

    I would've forced tulsi chai down your throat to drown the morosness of the cold lolzzzz cute

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  3. Arun Prasadh7 October 2015 at 06:09

    lol

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  4. magiceye7 October 2015 at 07:16

    :) best time to get pampered!!

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    1. Rat15 October 2015 at 12:01

      Indeed it is... Thank you Deepak Ji :)

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  5. cifar shayar7 October 2015 at 11:18

    cold is really bad , nice read

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    1. Rat15 October 2015 at 12:02

      yeah, it is the worse short term illness. thanks for the read, Shayar :)

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  6. Akash Govindarajan7 October 2015 at 20:05

    Lolmax ! Nice one Meera!! :D

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  7. Amit Panwar8 October 2015 at 16:31

    @ Rat

    My favorite from the list is "Engima"..but more than anything else Moon injecting the earth with rosy slumber is superb.

    Regards
    Amit

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    1. Rat15 October 2015 at 12:03

      Thank you for surfning my posts... Keep visiting Amit :)

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  8. Shahid Ali khan8 October 2015 at 17:13

    @Rat

    Great post i like the way you have explained

    Regards
    Shahid

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    1. Rat15 October 2015 at 12:04

      Thank you. Welcome to my space , Shahid :)

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  9. Somali K Chakrabarti8 October 2015 at 22:23

    Oh this is so sweet. Amma would make sure the Rat is soon hale and hearty. :-)

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  10. Kish11 October 2015 at 23:14

    Well, that was one nice dramatic, thrilling read. I love your writing style.
    Btw, if you're cold next time try some Ginger tea.

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    1. Rat15 October 2015 at 12:06

      I'm glad you enjoyed the thrill.. I love Ginger Tea. :P
      Thanks Kish :)

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  11. radhika chaudhari2 November 2015 at 17:09

    I feeling thrill after reading this piece of text. This is called short but effective writing.
    Regard
    Radhika

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    1. Rat3 November 2015 at 22:25

      Thank You Radhika for enjoying the thrill. welcome to my space. :)

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  12. caterpillar2 November 2015 at 23:45

    THAT was a nice one....:)

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    1. Rat3 November 2015 at 22:27

      Thanks Caterpillar. Welcome to my burrow. Hope you enjoy my nibbles :)

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  13. Payal Rastogi20 April 2018 at 17:07

    Nicely written. Thanks for the share mr. RAT :D
    Payal
    Regards.

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    1. Rat10 October 2018 at 00:40

      Happy to see a comment in my old posts .:)

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