Nobody knows the empty smile I wear
Nobody sees even my single tear
Nobody knows that I am in pain
Nobody hears my prayers go in vain
Nobody knows how deep I love you
Nobody sees my feelings for you
Nobody knows if I am gone
Nobody hears when I’m left alone
Nobody knows when I am confused
Nobody sees my happiness refused
Nobody knows what I desire and dream
Nobody hears my muted scream
Nobody knows what I am longing for
Nobody sees what's there in store
Nobody knows the secrets I hold
Nobody hears what my heart was told
Nobody knows, without you, I become restless
Nobody sees me hiding in the darkness
Nobody knows how do I feel
Nobody knows how do I feel
Nobody knows or probably they never will...
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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I really enjoyed your poem, and I understand more than you will ever know.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you can connect to it, Monica. :)
DeleteBeautiful and I felt your pain and my eyes filled with each word I read
ReplyDeleteThank you Aprile.
DeleteThats really a heart-touching poem dearie! Well-wriiten.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leena :)
DeleteMesmerizing!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Tina :)
Delete"...muted scream"...says it all...
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's how it is. Keep visiting, Sumana.
DeleteNobody knows...how beautifully penned... Loved the read!
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you loved it. Thanks Maitreni :)
Deletethat's the consequence of poetry; now someone knows. A powerful write
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thanks for the read, Gillena :)
DeleteI think people know more than you know, but...
ReplyDeleteNobody says they see how you feel
Nobody says they see what's concealed
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Alas.
You said it right. Nobody says. Thanks, Bjorn :)
DeleteThis is so relatable... In a way very true... we all feel like this in one point or the other... I am happy that there is someone for her!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm happy too. Thank you, Loco :)
DeleteNice to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rupam :)
DeleteToo much pain. Trye story for many...
ReplyDeleteWell expressed.
Good to see you here, Anita. :)
DeleteBeautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteThe repetition in your poem works so well to strengthen the meaning of your words; but as Bjorn said, people probably do know more than you realize.
ReplyDeleteNot everyone but probably, some do know. Glad you liked it, Mary :)
DeleteLovely one Meera :-)
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DeleteIt is good to write and share these feelings. I liked the repetition, it works very well.
ReplyDeleteAt times sharing is a relief too. Thank you, Sherry :)
DeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sanaa :)
DeleteBeautiful poem. It is very heartfelt and touching. <3
ReplyDeleteAlways good to see your comments here. Thanks so much, Vashti :)
DeleteI believe we all feel this pain at some point...it takes one who reaches across to show us they know to break this pain.
ReplyDeleteTrue, everyone must have felt this. Thanks, Donna :)
DeleteYeah.. know the feeling.. when the facades are strong, nobody knows ...
ReplyDeleteYeah you said it right. Thanks Jyotsna :)
DeleteI like your use of repetition in this one.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it, Rosemary :)
DeleteOh my! I'm feeling a little blue now; so I can so relate to it.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Meera. Very nicely put together.
Ah, you can relate to my lines. Thanks, Divya. :)
DeleteWell expressed... we see you now... sensitive and creative.
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It means a lot. Thank you so much Garon. :)
DeleteA gem.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteWhat a lovely outpouring of soul-felt emotions! Truly a gem, Meera :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravish for your kind words :)
Deleteunsaid emotions are more painless and remain with us till the end of our life, beautiful poem to express this feeling
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Yeah but then we also need to find a way to express our emotions. Let the unspoken be heard. Thanks, Cifar. :)
Deletewow! expressed beautifully....
ReplyDeleteThanks, Taalib :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed, dear :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Purba. :)
DeleteNobody knows unless told or at least shown some indications. The pace of things these days make it difficult for others to stop and ponder and for one to be noticed.
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Unnoticed, yeah. Thank you, Hank :)
DeleteI feel incredible sadness in your words ....
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to see my words reached the readers, the way I wanted it to be.
DeleteThe loneliness and sadness is so loud in this poem. I wonder if the speaker will share the words with all those bodies who don't know...
ReplyDeleteI wonder the same.. Thanks Magaly :)
Delete...nobody knows whats there in store...
ReplyDeletePerhaps the saddest line. We have all gone through someone not returning our feelings - but for NOBODY to know what we have to offer, for no-one to see the person inside. Very sad.
At one point we all must have went through this feel. Thanks for the read, Margaret :)
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DeleteSo much depth in the feelings here, no wonder it is a WoW post!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Alok. :)
DeleteLovely words, lovely feelings.
ReplyDeleteGood to see you here, Jaideep. Keep visiting! :)
DeleteSo sad, emotive, but there are times we have to write it out. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteWe all should write it out. Thank you, Susie :)
DeleteYou express the hearts of so many of us and beautifully!
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to know that I penned down the feelings of many. Thank you, Carol :)
DeleteNobody knows but some have an idea. Nice write!
ReplyDeleteYeah, quite true.. Thanks Bekkie. :)
DeleteOnly we can understand our inner struggles and turmoil ... very well expressed ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it, Amrit :)
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